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gilgamesh 2015-06-28 20:19:16 +08:00 via Android
Parse 的速度就够不 save life 了...
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PP 2015-06-28 20:49:29 +08:00 via iPad
Old America never die. It's not a joke, if people do not stay sharp, there will be tons of historical roll-back. Love wins, it's not a final victory, it's a splendid milestone. 5vs.4, it's not strong, it's minority. A country should be fulfilled with encouragement, America should be, China should be, every country should be. LGBT, congratulations! People win.
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Yvette 2015-06-28 22:23:21 +08:00
第二段第二句貌似应该是 are fond of :)
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firldlove 2015-06-28 23:38:24 +08:00 via iPad
语法错误有点儿多。。
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vivianalive 2015-06-29 01:42:48 +08:00
比较难读，语法的小错误问题不大，但用词和叙述方式比较生硬。
比起第一次看你的帖子的时候进步很多了。 |
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df4VW 2015-06-29 07:15:01 +08:00
楼上正解
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